Literacy Narrative Revision
Lindsey commented on my paper about adding detail to the goal of my story so I’m going to go back and change the order in which I wrote things to add more detail to the main goal.
Lindsey also commented that I need to backup my paper more by reiterating the main idea in my last paragraph of my paper so I will go back and relook at my last paragraph and add my moments that back up my main idea.
In Matt’s end comment one thing really stood out to me and that was his point of adding more detail about how I felt moving from my old high school to my new high school. To fix this I will go back and add detail of emotions about how I felt and what I felt like starting at my new school.
